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I'm not 100% certain about this newest scene because it may be too esoteric for some people. I think it's important though becuse I couldn't stop writing. The next thing just kept happeneing in my mind and I had to write it down. Very much a "muse inspired" piece I just don't know if everyone is going to understand what I've written.

What's sometimes amazing with writing is the surprises. I had NO idea that this was going to happen when I started writing this particular ritual. I'm starting to think that the story has its own life now and I'm just the guy in the middle. I'm as surprised about how the story has gone at this point as you will be.

Feedback please!!!